Jan 242010

Here it is… enjoy! I wish there was more to say… but there is not!

RITUAL WITNESS CHAPTER 2

Since I have nothing else to really say today… here is a funny video that I found that makes me think of Richard.

2 Responses to “Ritual Witness, Chapter 2”

  1. Dan says:

    Here and I though I was going to hear, “you spin me right round like a record baby right round right round….”.LOL

  2. Inquisitor Medina says:

    Hi

    This is quite a change of pace and style from the opening. Good to see you are keeping to your commitment! I’m holding judgement till I’ve read a few more chapters, but that last line doesn’t work with the preceding paragraph: nothing in the penultimate paragraph suggests he wouldn’t attend, nor is the pace right to throw it in as end of section humour.

    Keep it it, I’m interested to see how it goes but don’t write more until we get our Rogue Trader special edition.

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